Yes, that review. Also the preceeding one too. Jason, was NOT submissive. This isn't a classical sub/dom thing. It's just two fucked up guys getting their rocks off (I love that phrase) in the only way they know how. I'm now staring anxiously at Welt. Have I drifted into writing fics that actually force the reader to think?

People from California say "pressies"? Good grief. Surely they should be talking about gift-wrapped boxes from the mall?

Shit. I wonder if Naughti will pop along to offer some advice since she's a 'wannabe dominatrix'? Argh.